Thursday, July 21, 2011

Forgotten loves

Was it a drunken night of a full moon?
you sat next to me complaining,
of inconsolable simple and complicated loves. 


Coming close in a grief born in negation
in moments of life when everything was dying 
in emptiness, memory waged its lonesome battle
against love and two lovers against time. 

3 comments:

  1. The most complicated war, whom every writer want to understand. The one between the time, the love and the lovers.

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  2. :) me likes though I'm not sure I quite understood it..

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  3. another great work manohar :)
    The magical surrealism of the first three lines reminds the genius of Gabriel Garcia Marquez. Kudos to you :)

    keep posting,
    Mohit
    http://notesbymohit.wordpress.com

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